I am a student at South Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
HI Nirvana it is me Arnicka fom school like your weekly wrap it brings me back to when i did a weekly warp mybe next time you could make it samaller next time.did you do this in a buddy?
Hey Nirvana it's Hollie I like your design of your poster I think its really pretty. I like how you described everything pretty well but I think you could maybe next time you could put a biger blurb
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HI Nirvana it is me Arnicka fom school like your weekly wrap it brings me back to when i did a weekly warp mybe next time you could make it samaller next time.did you do this in a buddy?
ReplyDeleteThanks Arnicka, I hope you like that I have made it smaller for you. And no I didn't have a buddy. What did you like about your Weekly Warp??
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Hey Nirvana it's Hollie I like your design of your poster I think its really pretty. I like how you described everything pretty well but I think you could maybe next time you could put a biger blurb
ReplyDeleteHi. Hollie
DeleteThank you for your feedback. I'm glad you liked my poster. Next time I will add a bigger blurb. Have you made a weekly warp before?
Bye. Thanks again