I am a student at South Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Milla here I really like that but one thing you should change is the backround it is very hard to see the words. and maby a little bit more things about what it is. goodday
Hi Milla here I really like that but one thing you should change is the backround it is very hard to see the words. and maby a little bit more things about what it is. goodday
hi nirvana..wow you knocked my socks off because you did heaps of work on your slides but i can not read the words. so can you put more writing on it next time please.
Hi Nirvana, I really like how you presented this slide and made it look outstanding. I just think that there is too little work, and you need to put in more information about pride and achievement. But the backgrounds on the slides are amazing and you should make more of these for different things. Check out my blog: http://wsajamariep.blogspot.co.nz/
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ReplyDeleteHi Milla here I really like that but one thing you should change is the backround it is very hard to see the words.
ReplyDeleteand maby a little bit more things about what it is. goodday
Hi Milla here I really like that but one thing you should change is the backround it is very hard to see the words.
ReplyDeleteand maby a little bit more things about what it is. goodday
hi nirvana..wow you knocked my socks off because you did heaps of work on your slides but i can not read the words. so can you put more writing on it next time please.
ReplyDeleteHi Nirvana, I really like how you presented this slide and made it look outstanding. I just think that there is too little work, and you need to put in more information about pride and achievement. But the backgrounds on the slides are amazing and you should make more of these for different things.
ReplyDeleteCheck out my blog: http://wsajamariep.blogspot.co.nz/
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