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I am a student at South Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Showing posts with label Good Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Good Writing. Show all posts
Wednesday, 21 August 2019
Comparing and Similarities
For reading Pango (BLACK) we had to do a sheet about comparing and similarities. We had to choose a famous astronaut. I choose Sally Ride, I had to do Mary Jackson too. They both had different thing to do with them and it was really fun learning about them. I found it easy to write the things down and found it hard to found out facts about them. Here is my work.
Labels:
Good Readers,
Good Writing,
Literacy,
Reading,
Writing
Tuesday, 30 July 2019
Things You Probably Didn't Know About Mars
For the last two week Miss Williamson's class had been working on writing about a different planet. Here is my one...
I found it easy to choose the planet I would write about.
I found it hard to find out facts about Mars
I found it easy to choose the planet I would write about.
I found it hard to find out facts about Mars
Labels:
Good Writing,
Literacy,
Questioning,
Reading,
Wow Words,
Writing
Wednesday, 26 June 2019
Paper Scissor Rock (Writing)
For the last three days Miss Williamson writing a story for this film. Click to see film
We had to write in first person I choose paper as she was my favorite person in the film here is my writing. I found it hard to write it down but I found it easy to choose a person in te film. Hope you like the film and my writing. Comment who you would choose and who your favorite person is.
We had to write in first person I choose paper as she was my favorite person in the film here is my writing. I found it hard to write it down but I found it easy to choose a person in te film. Hope you like the film and my writing. Comment who you would choose and who your favorite person is.
Labels:
Good Writing,
Literacy,
Paper Story,
Writing
Tuesday, 11 June 2019
South Hornby School Lighting Strike
For the last three days Arnicka and I had been writing a story about South Hornby School (SHS) It's called South Hornby School Lighting Strike. It's about four girls and Miss Williamson who spent the night at South Hornby School and Miss Williamson. Miss Williamson gets hit by lighting and got onto the playground.
Here is the story hope you like it...
Click on the start of the story to read it better!
Here is the story hope you like it...
Click on the start of the story to read it better!
Labels:
Brian Storm,
Good Writing,
Literacy,
Story,
Writing
Friday, 3 May 2019
Fortune Teller
My writing class had to make fortune tellers and then try and make instructions about How to Make a Fortune Teller/ I liked making my fortune teller because I could see if my friends will have good or bad fortunes in life. I also liked coloring it in. In my instructions I didn't say that you could color it in. But do what ever you like to it.
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| My instructions |
Labels:
Good Writing,
Literacy,
Writing
Wednesday, 24 October 2018
Super sentences
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| Here is my small cute little penguin |
The penguin walked across the ice.
The small cute little penguin walked carefully across the hard cold slippery ice.
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| This tall young giraffe can ran like the wind in the long green grass. |
The giraffe ran across the grass.
The tall young giraffe ran fast across the long tall green grass.
Labels:
Good Writing,
Literacy,
Wow Words,
Writing
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