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I am a student at South Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Showing posts with label Brainstorm. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Brainstorm. Show all posts
Thursday, 2 August 2018
Winter Recipe
First we had to brainstorm Winter related words. Then we talked about words we use to measure when we are cooking at home. We then wrote ingredients for Winter using our group brainstorm. Here is my Winter recipe.
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Thursday, 5 July 2018
Winter Poem
In writing I have been learning about winter and poems. I have made a poem all about winter and what I do in winter. I found writing my poem the easier they thinking about what to say and how to write it down. But I got there in the end. We plan it together and then we write soon of our own. Here is my Winter poem:
Rain comes down hard and cold from the dark grey clouds. Drenching my clothes, making me soggy and wet. Freezing my toes off like Antarctic ice. A scrumptious hot chocolate making me warm and fluffy inside. Pj, movies and don’t forget the popcorn or candy while you watch you favorite movie. Hot dinner roast or soup yummy in my tummy. I love winter it is so fun because I can have snowball fights and making snow men.
Rain comes down hard and cold from the dark grey clouds. Drenching my clothes, making me soggy and wet. Freezing my toes off like Antarctic ice. A scrumptious hot chocolate making me warm and fluffy inside. Pj, movies and don’t forget the popcorn or candy while you watch you favorite movie. Hot dinner roast or soup yummy in my tummy. I love winter it is so fun because I can have snowball fights and making snow men.
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