I am a student at South Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
For the start of the year we have been working on posters to introduce our self's and post it on our blogs. We had to make a picture of our self and some text about our self. Here is my picture.
Hi Nirvana What a lovely introduction. I like most subjects at school but I do especially like writing and art too. What an interesting animal you have chosen as your favourite, a wolf. Have you seen a real wolf? The yellow writing on your slide was hard to read. I think your drawing of yourself is great. Mrs S
Hi Nirvana What a lovely introduction. I like your subject because I love art but I don´t really like writing but My favorite kind of writing is recounts. My favorite animal is a wolf I like wolfs because they are cuddly and nice and hairy that is why I love them so much. My favorite food is lamb chops because they have a nice juicy taste. The flavor oh that just hits ya. Next time you can maybe put it in a different size because I can´t read it unless I go close up to it.
Hi nirvana I really love your person I like how you made the glasses on your own unlike some people. Next time I think you need to make some of the words bigger because I cant read some of them any way I love it so much
Hi Nirvana i like your inspiration on your work I also like wolfs like you I like your fonts but you have to make the font size more bigger. i'm just asking who is your favorite person?
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Hi Nirvana
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely introduction. I like most subjects at school but I do especially like writing and art too. What an interesting animal you have chosen as your favourite, a wolf. Have you seen a real wolf? The yellow writing on your slide was hard to read. I think your drawing of yourself is great.
Mrs S
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DeleteHi Nirvana
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely introduction. I like your subject because I love art but I don´t really like writing but My favorite kind of writing is recounts. My favorite animal is a wolf I like wolfs because they are cuddly and nice and hairy that is why I love them so much. My favorite food is lamb chops because they have a nice juicy taste. The flavor oh that just hits ya. Next time you can maybe put it in a different size because I can´t read it unless I go close up to it.
Who is you favorite person?
By Aone
Hi nirvana I really love your person I like how you made the glasses on your own unlike some people. Next time I think you need to make some of the words bigger because I cant read some of them any way I love it so much
ReplyDeleteHi Nirvana
ReplyDeletei like your inspiration on your work
I also like wolfs like you
I like your fonts but you have to make the font size more bigger.
i'm just asking who is your favorite person?
By Isabella