For the last two week Miss Williamson's class had been working on writing about a different planet. Here is my one...
I found it easy to choose the planet I would write about.
I found it hard to find out facts about Mars
I am a student at South Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Showing posts with label Wow Words. Show all posts
Tuesday, 30 July 2019
Monday, 17 June 2019
All about me Reading
For the last two weeks we have been making identity posters about our self. I found this a little hard and challenging. Here is what I come up with...
Labels:
Identity,
Literacy,
Questioning,
Wow Words,
Writing
Wednesday, 24 October 2018
Super sentences
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| Here is my small cute little penguin |
The penguin walked across the ice.
The small cute little penguin walked carefully across the hard cold slippery ice.
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| This tall young giraffe can ran like the wind in the long green grass. |
The giraffe ran across the grass.
The tall young giraffe ran fast across the long tall green grass.
Labels:
Good Writing,
Literacy,
Wow Words,
Writing
Thursday, 2 August 2018
Winter Recipe
First we had to brainstorm Winter related words. Then we talked about words we use to measure when we are cooking at home. We then wrote ingredients for Winter using our group brainstorm. Here is my Winter recipe.
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Labels:
Adjectives,
Brainstorm,
Literacy,
Recipe,
Winter,
Wow Words,
Writing
Thursday, 5 July 2018
Winter Poem
In writing I have been learning about winter and poems. I have made a poem all about winter and what I do in winter. I found writing my poem the easier they thinking about what to say and how to write it down. But I got there in the end. We plan it together and then we write soon of our own. Here is my Winter poem:
Rain comes down hard and cold from the dark grey clouds. Drenching my clothes, making me soggy and wet. Freezing my toes off like Antarctic ice. A scrumptious hot chocolate making me warm and fluffy inside. Pj, movies and don’t forget the popcorn or candy while you watch you favorite movie. Hot dinner roast or soup yummy in my tummy. I love winter it is so fun because I can have snowball fights and making snow men.
Rain comes down hard and cold from the dark grey clouds. Drenching my clothes, making me soggy and wet. Freezing my toes off like Antarctic ice. A scrumptious hot chocolate making me warm and fluffy inside. Pj, movies and don’t forget the popcorn or candy while you watch you favorite movie. Hot dinner roast or soup yummy in my tummy. I love winter it is so fun because I can have snowball fights and making snow men.
Wednesday, 2 May 2018
Best Part of Me!
This week in writing we have been leaning to use adjectives. We read the Story " The Best Part of Me" by Wendy Ewald. Next we brainstormed ideas about our best body part. This is my writing:

What is your best body part and why?

What is your best body part and why?
Labels:
Body Parts,
literacy.,
Wow Words,
Writing
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