I am a student at South Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Bonjour Nirvana Sita here! It looks like you have alot of reasons why we should respect the school its really good! I like how you said what to do and what not to do all of these thing are 100% true! I have a question, how long did it take for you to do this because it looks like alot of work!!! Keep up the FANTASTIC work! Bye :):):):)
Hi Nirvana its Alizae here now WOW! that great Nirvana so its a bye Nirvana its so nice but keep it up your mom wll be happy nirvana but bye now good job nirvana bye.
Hi nirvna it is Camryn and I read your slide it was really good I hope you make a nater slide like this again they are really cool I wish I can be like you keep the good work up and do more of this slides.
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i like your wika nirvana
ReplyDeleteGood job but next time put some full stops in
ReplyDeleteNice Job Nirvana but were is your full stops. by bailey
ReplyDeleteHi I like how you show that you now how to show RESPECT that's great,
ReplyDeletebut do you now how to show it.
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Bonjour Nirvana Sita here!
ReplyDeleteIt looks like you have alot of reasons why we should respect the school its really good! I like how you said what to do and what not to do all of these thing are 100% true! I have a question, how long did it take for you to do this because it looks like alot of work!!!
Keep up the FANTASTIC work!
Bye :):):):)
Hi Nirvana its Alizae here now WOW! that great Nirvana so its a bye Nirvana its so nice but keep it up your mom wll be happy nirvana but bye now good job nirvana bye.
ReplyDeleteHi nirvna it is Camryn and I read your slide it was really good I hope you make a nater slide like this again they are really cool I wish I can be like you keep the good work up and do more of this slides.
ReplyDeletehey nirvana your best friend here,
ReplyDeletei like the backrounds on your slides and how your done it keep it up
hey!! Nirvana your bffae here me and you did a great job at makeing this but it ws dificalt-Kirsty/bffea
ReplyDeleteHi nirvana kirsty here we shor did a great job at this
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