I am a student at South Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Nirvana, Fenix VT323 here. I enjoyed the part when you put the swimming slide in, I like swimming too. This part gave me a memory about when we had our great swimming teachers. Next time, you could insert more pictures. Bye Nirvana!
Hey Nirvana Shyla here, I liked the bit where you told us about swimming and also when you put the pics in.Something you could work on is to use sentences.Bye!
Kia ora Nirvana it's Aryan just checking out your blog! I like how you put pictures to do with what you were saying. Next time could you add a bit more slides. Anyways cya next time!
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great job I liked every pic see ya
ReplyDeleteHi Nirvana, Fenix VT323 here.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the part when you put the swimming slide in, I like swimming too.
This part gave me a memory about when we had our great swimming teachers.
Next time, you could insert more pictures.
Bye Nirvana!
Hey Nirvana Shyla here,
ReplyDeleteI liked the bit where you told us about swimming and also when you put the pics in.Something you could work on is to use sentences.Bye!
Kia ora Nirvana it's Aryan just checking out your blog!
ReplyDeleteI like how you put pictures to do with what you were saying.
Next time could you add a bit more slides.
Anyways cya next time!