I am a student at South Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi NIrvana, I really enjoyed watching your video of you juggling. It looks like a lot of fun. I like that you have included details of what you need to juggle. Good work. from Mrs Pam
Hey Nirvana, I can tell that you have put a lot of effort in to this slide. On slide four I found it really hard to read the writing on the right side. What do you think you could do to make it easier to read? I wonder if one day you will be able to juggle three balls! I think it takes a lot of practise!
Kia Ora Nirvana, my name is carmel and I go to Waima school. I really enjoyed reading the tips on how to juggle and I like how you said patience it was funny
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Hi NIrvana, I really enjoyed watching your video of you juggling. It looks like a lot of fun. I like that you have included details of what you need to juggle. Good work. from Mrs Pam
ReplyDeleteHey Nirvana, I can tell that you have put a lot of effort in to this slide. On slide four I found it really hard to read the writing on the right side. What do you think you could do to make it easier to read? I wonder if one day you will be able to juggle three balls! I think it takes a lot of practise!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Nirvana, my name is carmel and I go to Waima school. I really enjoyed reading the tips on how to juggle and I like how you said patience it was funny
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