Writing: Half Live Half Nature
This week in Miss Johnston's Writing group me and Chelsea are in the middle of a story we are writing. This is it:
P.S This is not finished :)
One nice afternoon Chelsea and I went out to the park. A new road it looked ok! Chelsea said Can we go this way?? I said No way I am not stepping in there!! Ok we will see who will get there first! 3,2,1 GO!! I went the way I go on wednesday Chelsea went the way I did not. My phone on high but Chelsea did not ring so I ring her. Hello, Hi Chelsea, oh it's you Chelsea little friend I am Half life Half Nature, Oh I need to go sorry... I dropped my phone and run to the park. I run back to get my phone... And run to the park.Chelsea was there and she said I win I win. I said do you have your phone? Um no I gave it to someone. Why? Because he didn't have one. It was a he! And why he can buy his own phone. No he did not have money. So what I called him! His name is Half live Half Nature. Chelsea said here he is.
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