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Friday, 30 June 2017

Writing

Hey guys, today I am going to show my writing here it is:


Title: Lost & Found 2


It was a nice Summer morning, Kirsty asked me if wanted to go up the hills for the day and I said “yes”. The sun shining very bright, we kept on walking, the next hill came along.

The next hill had a sign it said “Go back or your regret it”. So Kirsty went for a closer look and when Kirsty looked back at me I was GONE! Kirsty went for help but instead she found my phone and a voice called out help me Kirsty said “Who is that”? A ghost came out, Kirsty said “AHH!! WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME” The ghost said “it is not me who what's something’s it’s you” Kirsty said “what do you meen”? And the ghost said NIRVANA Kirsty said how do you know her”?

Kirsty tries to called someone but there was no service. She went looking for me once again. She found a boat and in it was a magic wand. Kirsty said the magic words abracadabra and I was there in a split second. I was there. Kirsty was so happy. I said"The last thing I remember was... disappearing. Where is my phone?" Kirsty says oh I saw it on the way here" So way do you do pick it up?" kirsty say "We can go back and get it now if you want"? I say " lets go"
In the forest Kirsty says  “We need to get your phone NOW” So we sailed to the forest and got her phone.

After calling my parents she said to me “ Do you think this was a good adventure”?  I reply with “Kind of” 5 minutes later Nirvana’s mum picks us up from the forest and we head home in her mum’s BIG BIG CAR. The end.

I have made a slide all about this and I have got it right here:
Hope you liked my writing bye!

2 comments:

  1. Hey BFF (Nirvana) Great job on this animation and writing
    Do you rember when we first made our first animation?
    Maybe next time you could finish the story.
    Anyway I have got to go now goodbye.

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  2. hi Nirvana, please, I want to see the rest of the story when they come out of the portal, you've really made my want to see more, and that is a good thing, so amazing work! well done!
    From Mikayla K.

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