How to make a great and amazing blog comment

This week in cybersmart we have been make a slide show of how to make a quality blog comment. And it is about a sheep how needs help to make a great and amazing blog comment. Here is my one.

ESIO TROT

This week we went to the library and I got the book ESIO TROT and here is want I think about it. 

The story it self is amazing and I love it.

Will there is this man named Mr Hoppy and this lady named Mrs Silver. Mr Hoppy loves Mrs Silver and wants to marry her.  But Mrs Silver loved her tortoise Alfie. Mr Hoppy byes a lot of tortoise's and tricks Mrs Silver and she believes it. Mr Hoppy tells Mrs Silver to say ESIO TROT to Alfie. She dose and he grow well NO Mr Hoppy swapped Alfie with a difference tortoise. That is it. Hoped you like to. Please read it's amazing.

Calendar Art

For calendar art this week we have to blend colors with paint. I really enjoy ed painting but I found it hard to not make a mistake. First we sketch a out line, then started at the top to button. Here is my one:











Hope you like my one and comment about thank you.

George's Marvellous Medicine

This week we went to the library and I got the book George's Marvellous Medicine and here is want I think about it.


The story it self is amazing and I love it.


Will George has a grandma and she needs to take some medicine and George hates to give it to her. So one day George makes a Marvellous Medicine and gives it to his grandma see grows bigger and bigger. She hits the roof and can not see George any more. George gives it to his father animals some of the Marvellous Medicine (They live on a farm).

Recount Writing

This week for writing we have been writing a recount. We first thought about want we wanted to write about. I write about my weekend/ Father's Day. Here is my writing. Click on picture if you can not see it.

Weather Sentences

For weather we have writing Sentences about the weather in Maori. When we first started we had to write ke te pehea te ahua  o te rangi? witch means "how is the weather?" and we have to reply "Ke Te" and then write something to do with weather and then we write it in English under it and draw a picture to do with it.